In this blog I am going to comment on 3 student’s beta presentations and give them my feedback, and also reflect on 3 students who also give comments to my beta presentation, and improvements of my digital artefact final.
First of all I would like to talk about the comment that I gave to 3 students.
Miki’s blog
The first student that I commented on is Miki’s blog. Her blog is about Detroit: Become Humans. So far I liked what she has done about her works. Her digital artefact will present it as a blog post. I suggested that she make the blog post short and intense because it is easy to read and easy to understand. In my opinion, I am not a fan of reading, so I don’t like long blogs, it is too wordy and it is easy to get lost and lose concentration. In addition, she…
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